February 25, 2009 8:37pm I will take you at your word that you want constructive comments. What I LOVE about this photo is that it looks like you are having fun. My personal style is that I like location shots and like to incorporate the background into the shot. What would make this shot better, for me, would be at least some color to the background if not having you on the beach somewhere (or something similar).
January 29, 2009 3:29pm Great shot, great expression, lots of personality and connection with the camera - this would be a great stock photo - photographers over there should be glad to get to work with you!