June 05, 2010 6:01am I like your expression hints a bit of a little devilish personality. Not a fan of the pose as you seem a bit tense but posture is great. Hands between your legs and a ridden up skirt doesn't add to the image I think you might have been a bit self conscious because the skirt was so short
But you can and do engage the viewer with you expression. Just work on your range and poses and you should do very well. You want to shoot a lot to develop your portfolio. Best of luck
