June 07, 2010 10:55am Gorgeous! Long, lean, full of clean lines. Crit/tip: her left elbow (the one closest to us) could be bent a bit more to get some negative space between her arm and her waist. She looks good, but visually there is a block of pick, block of skin, block of black. It's not totally on you as photographer because much of this has to do with the cut of her shirt, but just something to watch for :)