September 01, 2012 4:03am Ayr beach location is fine but the concept doesnt really work :-( - the lighting on you needs a little off camera flash and more 'focus' on you as the subject....lose the tuba and just keep the image on you at all times - no-one plays a tuba at sunset on a beach in Ayr
(sorry to be harsh but its advice I think you need to have Maria)
