March 21, 2013 1:25pm This is the nearest, but I feel you're lacking connection between your character and the viewer. I see this a lot and it's a very simple tweak; remember that your mouth can say more then your eyes. The image of you next to the tree is ok but I can't tell how you feel about the setting, the sword should say strong but it's far too melancholic. Take stronger steps to express yourself and if the photographer is anywhere near a professional they will guide that energy.
