June 30, 2013 10:40pm this one the overall clean up is great. you kept all that intact which is the most important part. some things you could do better is make add some dodging under her eyes mid way down on the cheek done. also there are some dark spots left of the lips that could use some lightening. the tone of this photo is off a tad making it seem darker and not as vibrant. so you could mess with the color range and curves to brighten it up a bit.
