August 19, 2018 3:04pm This would have been an amazing shot if you had just simple put your hands on your hips and none of all that drama. Too busy and it looks unprofessional. When a hand in the picture is as big as the face, that's a no no. More often less is more especially with all that busy styling. And why not just keep the head piece and no long ponytail. I get the image of a wild horse when I see that ponytail. Your skin looks brilliant. The lighting is good. The lipstick is ridiculous. I would like to see you do something simple - clean hair and makeup, natural hair at the beach. I would like to consider you for as an extra in my film in development. As a photographer, I see your potential. But you need to work with better talent so you can shine. Email me if you get anything from my critique - [email protected]
