December 30, 2007 1:02am i saw you wanted this critiques.. the reflector at the bottom is too powerful and creating a 'horror lighting' try bringing it higher or having more light come from above. there are weird shadows.. and there was a comment made to up the contrast to reduce yellowness.. dont do that. adding contrast isn't needed, just bring down the yellow, aka up the blue a tiny itsy bitsy bit. you could even the light through burning dodging too but itd be easier to do it in camera. especially so the hot spot on her face isnt the under part of the nose.