March 27, 2008 12:06am I'm sorry if I was too critical in my previous comment. Just after I turned off my computer, I decided perhaps I should never write if something seems bad to me ... only write about what is good.
In these photos I liked the location and the style. I intended to suggest some changes that would make them better.
March 26, 2008 2:47am Interesting,but for me the shoes and the pose of the feet destroy this photo.
Per my taste, the other one is better and I wondered how it would have looked if your face were visible and hence I moved to this image.
My guess / preference would be the other photo, legs down, with the face only about half turned ... to show some hint of expression and yet be mysterious.
It is a good setting and a good general idea and you are on the right track. Perhaps you and the photographer can meet and discuss that shoot and then again try what was good or almost good and then do really well.
