August 18, 2009 12:20pm I think this shot is trying to express more motion and energy, but falls a little short. The open coat implies something more dynamic, but the images overall doesn't really have strong lines. It's not really clear what the feeling is. You give off a sort of innocence, vulnerability, and optimism, with your face, posture, and legs, but it seems contradicted by the arms and the kind of glamorous way the coat hangs on you. Think about clarity. What is your body saying?
July 15, 2009 9:10pm well i do really like this, but I wish maybe it was a little different...maybe with you looking at the camera and although you have a gorgeous smile i see this one being better as a little more serious...but thats just my opinion and overall i still really like this one.
February 05, 2009 10:03am This is good, even though you are not looking at the lens.
I noticed that you don't look straight into the lens so often, that is good in some photos, but a model NEED to bring feelings into to the photograph, and in a matter to do so, she need to act like she is an actress, looking right at the camera and being whatever she needs to be to fulfill the role that she is being paid for.
Always remember that.
February 05, 2009 10:03am This is good, even though you are not looking at the lens.
I noticed that you don't look straight into the lens so often, that is good in some photos, but a model NEED to bring feelings into to the photograph, and in a matter to do so, she need to act like she is an actress, looking right at the camera and being whatever she needs to be to fulfill the role that she is being paid for.
Always remember that.
